barely there, barely aware
- inside her cremated mind.
Remembering things that never was,
forgetting things she never knew.
She is waiting.
For life.
For time.
For she is oblivious,
unaware that she is dreaming;
she clings to her dance
and refuses to let go.
But, she stumbles
- and broken by the mirrors
within her imaginary studio,
she judges her own reflection;
without knowing why.
Written by me. Photo by Ellen Wilberg.
How long have you been writing poetry? It's very difficult to do it! Your poem is lovely, it suits the pic perfectly. Thanks for sharing! :))
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely photo of you, very ethereal.
ReplyDeleteThat poem is beautifully written, and very poignant.
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Gorgeous photo (as usual!) XOXO, www.NatalyasCloset.com
ReplyDeleteyou're so cute. great poem! x
ReplyDeleteNydelig, både bilde og dikt. Du er utrolig flink :)
ReplyDeleteyou could not be any cooler of a person. i LOVE your poem. granted, maybe i'm biased because it's the type of poem i like and the imagery appeals to me greatly, but i think it's beautiful. fragile yet strong. the photograph you chose to pair with it is perfection. very gorgeous. you look like a forest nymph.
ReplyDeleteback in my teen years i used to post my poems online, but nowadays i'm not sure i'd have the guts.
excellent job. your courage is inspiring.
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Loove the poem! <3
ReplyDeleteLove the pic too, so dreamy innocent like <3
beautiful all around.
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<333 So beautiful!!!
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OMG, my friend is so talented. I'm so proud of her :)
ReplyDeleteIt has been a long time since I read your poetry dear, I was wondering if you were still doing it, and here is my answer. Keep doing it.
Kisses!
so talented!!
ReplyDeletelovely, you're a poet too! -xxoo
ReplyDelete:) Ladyofashion
The words of your poem match the beauty of your photo.
ReplyDeleteBesos.
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I have to agree with "everyone else", I've missed your poems, and this one is lovely. Love the feeling of it, and paired up with the picture it's magnificent! :)
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ReplyDeleteLovely poem and amazing picture to it! <3
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Absolutely beautiful. I adore your blog :)
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written words! Wonderful work <3
ReplyDeleteI have to admit, I've only read poetry when they made us in school, but this poem is really great (I'd definitely read anything you write). I love the photo, the theme and the feeling of this. You are a very talented writer/poet/photographer/model/stylist/blogger etc :)
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Both the picture and what you wrote are so beautiful!
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nostalgia
ReplyDeleteJeg har savna diktene dine. <3
ReplyDeletebe happy and love. kiss
ReplyDeleteHey, I really love your poem, it's wonderful!:)
ReplyDeleteeven if it makes me a little sad...
All the best! :)
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